My Room
my room is a mess like a bomn hit it
my room is like a pigs den
at night you can hear my parents snore
you can hear my dads alarm go off in the morning at 5 or 6 o'clock
at night my cat Storm comes in my room and wakes me up in the middle of the night
The Beach
the beach is where I go swimming with my dog
the water at the beach at night is shiny and sparkly when the moon comes out
the beach reminds me of when I go fishing with my dad
the beach reminds me of the hot days we have had
The Kitchen
I love when I cook in the kitchen with my mum
I smell the food for dinner when I am in the lounge
I can taste food even thought I am not eating
I love when my mum bakes cakes and I get to taste test before and after is ready
to be cooked or not cooked
I can smell the delicious brownie cooking in the oven
A place that is special to me
Otaki because I have lived there for 12 years my whole life
Otaki is where I was raised
Otaki because that is where I live
Otaki because that is where all my animals are
Otaki is where I have a dog and 3 cats that I love so much
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