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Friday 17 May 2019
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Hello my name is spot i live in the ocen but one morning i woke up and i was in this squre thing
fill of water so i could stay alive ovesaly  so i grew up and now i don't have that much space in
the sink and i now know what this thing is called and sometimes i just wish i could go home and be
with my famliy again and i hope that they are  ok and alive. I love it here but sometimes i can get
a little lonley and sad. Because i am lost without my frineds and famliy. :(
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous17 May 2019 at 10:35

    Great story Sarita. I think that you need to put some more full stops in your story because it is hard to read without them. I liked how you talked about how he was feeling. Great story.

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