BEACH
The beach the beach fun. Because it's a place where everybody can have fun.
The beach is were little kids and adults can go for a swim together. The beach i
fun because people from all over otaki can come and have fun with the children at
the beach. At the beach you can also bring a dog instead of like being at the pool
where you can't bring your dog. The beach is also fun because you get to go to the
beach with your friends and you can go look for muscles and find shells that have
not bean opened.
The beach is were little kids and adults can go for a swim together. The beach i
fun because people from all over otaki can come and have fun with the children at
the beach. At the beach you can also bring a dog instead of like being at the pool
where you can't bring your dog. The beach is also fun because you get to go to the
beach with your friends and you can go look for muscles and find shells that have
not bean opened.
I think the beach is fun because I take my dog down there and we have fun
together and play. She jumps in the waves like a lunatic. It's funny to see but it's
also very werid. We have races up and down the beach and who can get to the
water the fastest. Sometimes my dog win's and sometimes I win. Then after that
we got her a puppy life jackets cos when I was little I would have a life jacket too
and we'd both be out there floating when a wave came in it would take me with it.
My mum would hold our lifejacket so we can stay close to her so we don't get into
a rip or anything like that.
together and play. She jumps in the waves like a lunatic. It's funny to see but it's
also very werid. We have races up and down the beach and who can get to the
water the fastest. Sometimes my dog win's and sometimes I win. Then after that
we got her a puppy life jackets cos when I was little I would have a life jacket too
and we'd both be out there floating when a wave came in it would take me with it.
My mum would hold our lifejacket so we can stay close to her so we don't get into
a rip or anything like that.
The beach is fun because you can ride your horse Up and down the beach and
have races with your friends if they have horses to. You can also race your friends
up and down beach. You can pick up sticks and shells that you've never seen
before or you have like them because they are pretty cool. You can take them
home and make cool pictures. You can also take home sand to make your picture
complete. For Mother's Day you can give her a present that you have made and
didn't from the shop and she will love it.
have races with your friends if they have horses to. You can also race your friends
up and down beach. You can pick up sticks and shells that you've never seen
before or you have like them because they are pretty cool. You can take them
home and make cool pictures. You can also take home sand to make your picture
complete. For Mother's Day you can give her a present that you have made and
didn't from the shop and she will love it.
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