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Hello my name is spot i live in the ocen but one morning i woke up and i was in this squre thing
fill of water so i could stay alive ovesaly so i grew up and now i don't have that much space in the sink and i now know what this thing is called and sometimes i just wish i could go home and be with my famliy again and i hope that they are ok and alive. I love it here but sometimes i can get a little lonley and sad. Because i am lost without my frineds and famliy. :( |
I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 17 May 2019
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Great story Sarita. I think that you need to put some more full stops in your story because it is hard to read without them. I liked how you talked about how he was feeling. Great story.
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