Setting (where)
New york city
Time (when)
12:00 in the after noon
On wednesday
Characters (who)
Hairy Harry
Sam
Mammoth hunters
Protaagonist (leading character)
Hairy Harry
Sam
Antagonist (competes or conflicts
with the main characters)
Mammoth hunters
Other characters
The public
Conflict (problem)
Hairy harry it getting hunted by
mammoth hunters
Rising action (suspense builds)
Harry is getting hunted and sam helps
Hairy harry hide until the hunters are
Gone away so they can hide
Somewhere else
CLIMAX (most exciting point)
Sam helps Hairy harry and
gets Harry to saftey
Falling action (action towards resolution)
The hunters find harry and sam and
Take both of them to there hideout
Where there is know resepshon
And where know one can find them
Resolution
He is going to be relest into a svana in
amirca where they hope that Hairy Harry
Will be safe and will not be hunted any more
By any one
Word count
724
TITTLE
Hairy Harry the mammoth
Once upon a time there was a mammoth and his best frined sam. sam named the mammoth hairy harry
and they had bean frineds sints they where little and now they go on walk together and harry carrys sam
every where because sam had a acadent when he was little and now his legs arnt working so sam carnt
walk any more so harry makes it like any other day for sam.
and they had bean frineds sints they where little and now they go on walk together and harry carrys sam
every where because sam had a acadent when he was little and now his legs arnt working so sam carnt
walk any more so harry makes it like any other day for sam.
Harry tries to make it as clear as possible to him that having legs is worse than not having legs. And harry
trys to make it fun for Sam but Sam goes home wondering what it would be like to live the rest of my life
with legs and then one day when they were out on a walk they seen some people they were hunting and
they were actually looking for a mammoth.
trys to make it fun for Sam but Sam goes home wondering what it would be like to live the rest of my life
with legs and then one day when they were out on a walk they seen some people they were hunting and
they were actually looking for a mammoth.
they were putting up signs saying hunting keep out up and watch out dangerous it went from a walk to
a not ordinary day of a walk and Sam was scared he didn't know what to do and so he try telling hairy
Harry where to go and what to do and they ran into New York City they ran straight through town and the
poachers
running after them and then harry said stop this isn't the way to face those poachers.
a not ordinary day of a walk and Sam was scared he didn't know what to do and so he try telling hairy
Harry where to go and what to do and they ran into New York City they ran straight through town and the
poachers
running after them and then harry said stop this isn't the way to face those poachers.
The guy on the sidewalk he was taking pictures of what was happening like it was some ordinary
day but it wasn't and Sam said no we have to keep running we have to I need to keep you safe you
are my only friend.
day but it wasn't and Sam said no we have to keep running we have to I need to keep you safe you
are my only friend.
I would do nothing without you around I wouldn't even be able to go and walks any more because
nobody else could carry me because I'm too big for them please hurry you have to stay with me you
can never leave and you can never stop hiding and running one day it will stop and we we'll have a
happy ending or not so happy ending but still and Harry was like I can't live my life running and hiding
from people who want to kill me and chase me away and Sam said we'll we have to do that because you'
my best friend and I would like nothing to happen to you and me and when they see me and see you
together wouldend you figure that we're best friends wouldn't they figure that we're best friends come on.
nobody else could carry me because I'm too big for them please hurry you have to stay with me you
can never leave and you can never stop hiding and running one day it will stop and we we'll have a
happy ending or not so happy ending but still and Harry was like I can't live my life running and hiding
from people who want to kill me and chase me away and Sam said we'll we have to do that because you'
my best friend and I would like nothing to happen to you and me and when they see me and see you
together wouldend you figure that we're best friends wouldn't they figure that we're best friends come on.
Harry said they are looking for me they want to kill me and hunt me. I don't know why but they probably
want my hair and skin to make jackets and stuff for people and they are using poison arrows it is illegal
but nobody can tell that accept us and the other thing is you can't walk like that's enough I thought not
walking was fun I thought it would be amazing because walks you and apatunty to make it seem like
it's amazing and there is like it's not amazing anymore I'm sorry to do this Sam I'm sorry to say this to
you but it's not happy is not helpful anymore.
want my hair and skin to make jackets and stuff for people and they are using poison arrows it is illegal
but nobody can tell that accept us and the other thing is you can't walk like that's enough I thought not
walking was fun I thought it would be amazing because walks you and apatunty to make it seem like
it's amazing and there is like it's not amazing anymore I'm sorry to do this Sam I'm sorry to say this to
you but it's not happy is not helpful anymore.
I love our walks but we miss stuff happens you're not the person to ask to go and get help I'm sorry I've
had to say it.
had to say it.
Sam got really upset but he said I can do this i will crawl my way to get help nomater how long it takes
you keep running you keep hiding and I promise I will find somebody. So they had a hug and sam took
a long time. He was looking for people that took months maybe even years until one day that he found
out that Harry was still alive and he got moved to a Savanna in America the poachers that were looking
for him they were finding him to get a new home for harry and all that stuffn and croling for nothing but
it was for a good thing he said.
you keep running you keep hiding and I promise I will find somebody. So they had a hug and sam took
a long time. He was looking for people that took months maybe even years until one day that he found
out that Harry was still alive and he got moved to a Savanna in America the poachers that were looking
for him they were finding him to get a new home for harry and all that stuffn and croling for nothing but
it was for a good thing he said.
Harry I hope you're having a good time in America because I'm having a good time here I'm getting new
legs in a couple weeks and I'll be able to walk so I go on walks and always remember that you carried
me everywhere you're a good friend Harry and I wish you never left.
legs in a couple weeks and I'll be able to walk so I go on walks and always remember that you carried
me everywhere you're a good friend Harry and I wish you never left.
And i hope your having a grate time with other indangered animals like kiwi’s and can you say hi for me
because i carnt but when i get new legs and older i will hopefule come and vizit you!!!!.
because i carnt but when i get new legs and older i will hopefule come and vizit you!!!!.
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