One cold and freezing morning. me and my friend decided about a week ago but we would climb the biggest mountain Mount Everest we packed yesterday and therefore that cause we new that it would take a long time to climb Mount Everest so we got out of tramping bags that how do I stuff and I'll food we got on the van we packed everything in that looks massive but it was really heavy and some parts with very light and so we drove about 24 hours so felt like the 5 days to get to where we wanted to and then we finally arrived and all of us was so excited and so we got our bags out of the car we put them on our backs and took some of the heavy stuff that was really really heavy up we started climbing and it sounded get really cold really easily so we went back down and we chat so it all the Warmest gear possible which made our bags lighter and so we climbed N Climb and Kinda got half way we dug a little hole we put up a little like shelter tent and we stuck it into the mountains and we slept in there for the light and so we took that down put it back and keep climbing and climbing that took another day and then another day went past and time with fast because we were having so much fun and a the sun went down one day it went really fast and we'll like what happened and so we had to set up camp it was like the middle of the night by him and so we only got about half to an hour of sleep and that made me mad because when you sleep for only a little while you get really angry when you're awake couldn't get enough sleep and so we carried on that took about 2 more days and one day we just had to keep walking through the night we were almost there we were almost at the top and then all of a sudden avalanche came and so we quickly ran down halfway down the hill and it just started and so we bilt a hole and it's no fun the avalanche it covered us and it took about 45 hours but it felt like days had gone past and so we finally got ourselves out and it turns out that we were at least 25 m away from each other it was so far away that we dug them so close so weird actually slept halfway down the mountain because of the avalanche Leo and pushed us out of our holes and we slid down the mountain and then ended up and another place completely different from where we were in Soviet keep climbing and keep climbing only seeing that there were other people climb the mountain so we went over to go see her and it wasn't people it wasn't human it wasn't dead and it didn't look friendly and so we turned around look back up the other side of the hill and we got to the top and we were so happy but it turns out we will wait for my schedule it took us longer than we expected it was only supposed to take us about 30 to 40 days but it took 60 days long time because of the avalanche more days and walking down mountain and it turns out that about 3 days before I come around to the side of mountains and it's still there but it had it's back turned and then I heard a noise and it's heard around and it's stated us and we just chill and we like what are we going to do weather Di mai tai chi Heads hospital and it was a bag and it was a person behined it and it turned Around And looks at us and he was only wearing like one leg pants and thermals and his shirt and he was freezing so we gave him some of our stuff we also gave them some more misu am I love the chucked a blanket over we set up a team he said side the gas cooker up and we cook a nice medium rare steak why are you doing why I was horrible And don't say that is probably fine it just your parents or friends didn't like you but you can come down the mountain with us and you'll be sick will take you to a hospital he was like no I never knew anybody else and he said thank you for this food i have toGo now bye and we work no wait wait until we're done come on you have to come down the mountain with us and he said no I want to die nobody loves me and so we see we love you both your friends when you like really would you actually you and did she have two days we wouldn't you can I come live with me I have a two-person apartment but I'm living in it And he said wait until wife and I said she died as a young age so I live by myself now and he was like did you have any Kids and And he said no I'm having kids we were planning on it will plan and getting a game stink married but she died in a life win on the hospital And after that he got a good home and he came with me and he lived a life happily-ever-after together in the same house it was fun and then we carried on our lives but jobs without City and yeah that was IT.
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Hi, Sarita. You have lots of great ideas in here. However, there are some things you need to go through and fix. Can you use Read and Write for google to have your story read aloud to you, like I showed you in class. Does it make sense? Is your punctuation in the right place, for example fullstops and capital letters? I like the way you have identified that climbing Mount Everest will take a long time.
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