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Friday, 26 July 2019


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Lots of fun it was two children named Hansel and Gretel I loved exploring and things they had fun together until the morning name when exploring and the forest to get some berries for their family so that you grab the basket And went off into the forest looking for berries when they came across  a Thorn bush They had all sorts of berries on it blackberries blueberries raspberries and they follow the thorn bush and it with him to a house made of candy with a witch lived but they didn't know that so Hansel and Gretel went off following the thorn bush and they came to this house for sweets and stuff and so they just started eating little by little by little by little pieces of of snapping with chocolate licking icing off walls getting all dirty and yucky eating Oreos lollipops candy canes and till they heard a sound and noise it came from the house this Creek you laugh hehehehehehehe Hansel and Gretel they didn't care what it was they just keep eating eating eating until the witch spot of them and she came up to the window and look out of the window and said oh my I might have some dinner tonight Hansel and Gretel way too busy eating away on the house then even realise the which was there the which came out on a broomstick you shared a part of stuff boiling Hansel and Gretel seen it so they just thought they would go inside and have a look at it and the witch she Trap Team they fell into the pot and she was mixing them from on top of the cage while singing hehehehehehe I might have some dinner tonight and Hansel and Gretel started screaming we're not dinner we're not food please don't cook us we promise will never come back and the witch you will you wait half my house, I got to build it back I don't have enough Suites or berries or anything and  Hansel and Gretel we're like theories we only came looking through the forest to find some barriers for Mum so she can make berry pie and has blueberries raspberries blackberries and the witch said already get those from the children like we don't know we thought your house was full of Barry so we came over I'm just follow the broom bush and the Thorn bush you know Thorn bushes around here you must have made that Up we swear on our lives we swear on Mum's Dad's and even though younger siblings that we don't care about we swear we were and the word keeps staring and stirring the pot and then I got really boiling and the kids started getting burnt and the mum heard them screaming to her mum rusthoven and she seen them through the window and thought my kids are in trouble I have to go save them but the witch might catch me to IV get back up fast before my kids die so the mum she went back home she started calling people to call the police she called everybody come on we need to save my children The Witches catch them and they're on the pot boiling and all the other parents like she's got to a kids and that's fresh and they're in the pot or no it may be too late let's go for they die so they said they found them thornbush and they clean inside sneaked around and the witch was going to the bathroom and she was going to go get more ingredients and so the mum and all the other adults helped undo the cage and under the liquor is that was on the hands are the kids don't even realise but it's recommended but I just don't want to eat it because it was black liquorice and so they went in and the which came back with all these different ingredients really get her dinner on she came out of a nice napkin on the table some nice knives and forks and she went back to the park and she started soon can I didn't even realise the kids were gone and they were quietly sneaking away and in the witch to South to them on a broomstick but you couldn't find them until she went back home and said I love to go find me some nude dinner plans maybe even handsome down or maybe I could answer the village  we are the kids live and so she did that shouldn't down to the village and nobody was there everybody is inside underneath stuff hiding from her cause I knew that come and want to find food for herself And then she went away and she found a dear and a beer so she killed them she dragged them back to her house that was half-eaten and she put them down to put them in the pot sister and she said she stared into it was boiling hot medium rare I don't taste so delicious and the family is good with happily-ever-after just make sure you don't send your kids are looking for berries because I'm a smell. But delicious cupcakes and I sings And Lollipops and lollies and now go over to them and I'll find them and then the which will catch them again and then get to work caption kids so she can eat them for her dinner Biggest doesn't like hunting for animals she only wants kids and flesh and fresh blood doesn't want animal blood it just tastes gross.  


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